Page 14 of PK, and another page that gained a panel from the script to final page, I wanted to show the Kerne lady's reaction to Kaylee's Translation Dance. Kaylee is generally excited, because she's always dreamed of space adventure and aliens, so getting to go on a space ship with the new Alien Overlords is a dream come true. Guess what Pauper shows up in 2 pages!
More info about this new project, Paragon Ketch can be found in this journal [link] and in the pages I'll be posting every week on DA for awhile.
I'm posting these to get peoples feedback, that means your opinions! Be vocal, don't like it, tell me why! If you like it tell me why too. XD
I'm planning on submitting this to a company, but I am aware of the current "State of the Industry" and what have you so PK may wind up becoming some sort of webcomic.
Noses, I noticed when I was doing the actual pages, all the noses were too flat and weird and way different from my sketches of the pages (that and someone on a forum pointed out the noses looked "off somehow" ) I did try to put more effort into the page as a whole too, so I probably changed up the eyes a tad too. XD
I noticed the noses where different, and the eyes seem different as well. Hopefully people respond well too it. It's not that big of a change so I don't think its a bad thing.
Oh no this page makes people explode?! It must be recalled XD I'm glad its funny though, sometimes I worry what makes me laugh wont translate to other people *does the translation dance*
seriously though, it seems different somehow. Did you change up the drawing style slightly or something? eyes?
Noses, I noticed when I was doing the actual pages, all the noses were too flat and weird and way different from my sketches of the pages (that and someone on a forum pointed out the noses looked "off somehow" )
I did try to put more effort into the page as a whole too, so I probably changed up the eyes a tad too. XD